How To Describe Race In Writing

Introducing Race & Skin Color Naturally

Anonymous asked: My main character is African American. Tin can I just say outright that her pare is black or would that exist offensive?

It'south not offensive to be blunt nearly a character's race. You lot'll want to piece of work it in naturally, though, equally you would any telling detail in your story. For case, something introductory along the lines of these would be perfectly fine:

• She was African American, the deep brown complexion she inherited from her mother, though her eyes, dark as smoke, she definitely got from her begetter.

• He pegged her as African-American, with the rich coloring of golden copper.

• She shifted in her chair, feeling awkward. Being the just Blackness daughter in the room, anybody's eyes instantly locked on her every bit the professor… [etc etc]

It really depends on the moment and the story's way how you'd similar to innovate race (specially if race doesn't be as nosotros know information technology in your story). In that location'south certain aspects to consider, though, such as narrative vocalization.

Hither is a volume passage that clearly and naturally introduces the race of the master graphic symbol:

• About people would chalk me upwards every bit your bones offspring of a mixed-raced union. I had skin people of poetic aptitude chosen Café au lait and which I called, to myself at least, 'my daddy shagged a White woman' chocolate-brown. I had in-betwixt pilus, a thick umber mane that resisted dreadlocks, braids, and every other course of styling. And I had Dad's features, or and so my Aunt Aggie always told me, which I liked; all of Dad's pictures pegged him for a looker of the Denzel Washington variety. -Faerie Blood, Angela Korra'ti

This paragraph is jam-packed with indications of the graphic symbol's race (and also, character vocalization). We learn she's Black and White not just considering she mentions existence the offspring of a mixed-race spousal relationship, seeing every bit that can be a mix of annihilation, just considering she makes the "daddy shagged a White woman" jest, notes how Afro hairstyles don't work with her, which builds the assumption of her beingness part Black, so compares her father to a Black celebrity.

[Withal: Note the above does use a nutrient clarification, admitting a bit mockingly, but food-skin comparisons are something generally to avoid.]

Here are some examples of descriptors of the character'southward race threaded throughout the story. This is from Fire Baptized by Kenya Wright.

• "Middle pounding, I stayed close to the buildings, hoping my brown peel would alloy with the dark's shadows. Cold pelting dripped into my optics. My wet dreadlocks roughshod onto my face, sticking to my cheeks and blocking my view." (Skin tone noted in comparison to settings, hair noted in similar fashion as the elements affect the graphic symbol's hair)
• "You're a sexy Mixie, aren't you? Dark, like chocolate. You Haitian?" (See! This was a major creep. Noo choco-comparisons no! Anyhow, someone else noting the graphic symbol'due south race, some other method)
• "I don't find that funny." I backed abroad from him and crossed my arms around my chest. "Particularly since i'thousand Black. Cut to the chase, and tell me what's going on." (Situational instance of noting race)

So yous run across, there'due south no one style to introduce a character'due south race and there's definitely cypher incorrect with being blunt. Be creative about it, and equally you would with whatsoever story, and spot out those natural openings where graphic symbol description would exist advisable.

~Mod Colette

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